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The Other Point of View

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My English teacher instructed us to write a poem yesterday. I think she'll be a little shocked after reading all the happy poems about snow, and butterflies-- then putting them next to mine. But I wanted to write about something important-- something real, and something big. Something that real animals, and real people go through everyday.

Animal abuse is real. I've seen it, and I've seen the animals that are the victims-- even the ones that don't survive. The problem is, most people don't even care. They whimper when commercials about pound animals come on, and fast forward (if possible, but they don't do anything about it. Myself included. I'm usually more of a happy-go-lucky person, but this isn't a happy-go-lucky issue-- this is real, and it's happening now. My goal is that this poem will have some impact on your view on this issue-- that maybe you won't just forget about those animals until the next commercial comes on.

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With that said, yay! My first submission! Reviews and criticism are highly appreciated. ;)
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ehertangerine's avatar
This is beautiful! <3
I absolutely despise people who do things to others, humans and other creatures, with no cause and no reason besides being mean and hurtful.
thanks for the +watch!